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@PikeyPaige yes? Wasn't that long.
The atypical ordering of the plot was a bit of a chore, and it dragged overlong here and there, but the prose was charming, with an engaging voice.
None of the characters were particularly likeable, except the applesauce, but all of them were pleasant enough company.
I wanted to give you a response that is as insightful and considerate as your feedback but I’m sure you’ve had your fill of my words at this point(lawl) and I guess I just want to sincerely thank you for reading it.
@PikeyPaige lmao, I can't tell if you're being charmingly catty or excessively appreciative. In any case, if you want insightful or considerate, I can promise you neither, but I can at least offer reasonably in-depth (with no allowance for utility, lol).
Ya know what. I honestly can’t tell either. I just do things and go “ oh shit I did that?” Dun goofed
LiteraryWho
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It's actually quite good. I read it all in one sitting, even though I had shit to do today, lol.
I wish I could say something profound about it, but the most I can muster is I feel like it deserves it.
Thanks for the story, in any case :D
PikeyPaige
Wow. The entire book? No shit?